2013년 1월 23일 수요일

my argumentative Essay.


Argumentative Essay: Capital punishment should be banned.
             Hello my name is Jino Jung and today I will tell you why capital punishment should be banned. I think that capital punishment should be banned because first, violence secondly, population decrease and last, pain of their families. What do you think about the capital punishment? If you think it should be allowed, it would be better to change your opinion after you read this essay.
             First, I’d like to tell you about the violence. Do you know the way of killing people when we do capital punishment? We cut their heads and we put them on the electric chair and we just hang them up at the streets. This can be a very serious problem for the teenagers. They might see these kinds of violent situations and will be scared of their society. Then, they will have problems adopting at the society. The percent of the violence range is very high in nowadays. Capital punishment would increase the violent rate because; the way of killing the person is very violent. Also, there are other ways of capital punishment rather than just shooting the people in a strict way. So this is the first reason why I think that capital punishment should be banned.
             Secondly, I will talk about the population decrease. The population is getting lower and lower because the babies aren’t enough. Also, the people who commit crime is usually adults not a grandpa or a grandma. These causes less workers and the technology might not develop. We have so much people die and less people of born. Also, if we kill all the people who commit crime, all the people might die because they commit small and big crime. This is the reason why I think capital punishment should be banned.
             Lastly, I will tell you about the pain of their families. If one people die, the families become depressed and very sad. No one is happy when someone dies. They feel sorry and they feel very painful. This means when we go on capital punishment, there are more and more families get depressed and the whole world might get depressed. Also, the families might revenge or do more harsh things because they did not die in an accident. So, this is the final reason why I think that capital punishment should be banned.
             For conclusion, I will tell you what I talked about. I talked about why I don’t like capital punishment by giving you three arguments. Those arguments are violence, population decrease and the pain of their families. Before I finish, let me tell you something. Why do we ban capital punishment? This is because it is not useful at all. The criminals might act better but it is not the best way to kill the person who committed crime. Now, what do you think about capital punishment? Do you think that it should go on? I’d like to tell you capital punishment should be banned seriously. Thank you for reading.