Hello, weather. You are very cold during time, period. you are often cold as ice, hot as a pot cool as a pool often warm as my mom. I hope that you always warm or cool. but you are getting and getting warmer and warmer and colder and colder.
you keep making natural disasters and it makes our human world destroyed.please stop that. i'd like to save our human world from becoming extinct from natural disasters.
now, i will tell you about you in KMLA. when i wake up and eat breakfast, then i have to meet you again every single day. when i meet the freezing cold like ice, i think you are very mean.
dear weather would you just be not as cold as before like the past 10 days? then i will be very thankful to you.
sincerly yours,
2013 1/11
jinojung
Hi Jino,
답글삭제This is a a good ode but it is a little short. try adding pictures to it to make it more visually appealing. When you use the pronoun "I", it must be capitalized. You also need to use capital letters after a period.
Hi!
답글삭제It is a very interesting ode, but it is a bit short. Also, just try to use some pictures or videos to make your posts more interesting. Keep working hard~
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)