my argumentative Essay.

Argumentative Essay: Capital punishment should be banned.

             Hello my name is Jino Jung and today I will tell you why capital punishment should be banned. I think that capital punishment should be banned because first, violence secondly, population decrease and last, pain of their families. What do you think about the capital punishment? If you think it should be allowed, it would be better to change your opinion after you read this essay.

             First, I’d like to tell you about the violence. Do you know the way of killing people when we do capital punishment? We cut their heads and we put them on the electric chair and we just hang them up at the streets. This can be a very serious problem for the teenagers. They might see these kinds of violent situations and will be scared of their society. Then, they will have problems adopting at the society. The percent of the violence range is very high in nowadays. Capital punishment would increase the violent rate because; the way of killing the person is very violent. Also, there are other ways of capital punishment rather than just shooting the people in a strict way. So this is the first reason why I think that capital punishment should be banned.

             Secondly, I will talk about the population decrease. The population is getting lower and lower because the babies aren’t enough. Also, the people who commit crime is usually adults not a grandpa or a grandma. These causes less workers and the technology might not develop. We have so much people die and less people of born. Also, if we kill all the people who commit crime, all the people might die because they commit small and big crime. This is the reason why I think capital punishment should be banned.

             Lastly, I will tell you about the pain of their families. If one people die, the families become depressed and very sad. No one is happy when someone dies. They feel sorry and they feel very painful. This means when we go on capital punishment, there are more and more families get depressed and the whole world might get depressed. Also, the families might revenge or do more harsh things because they did not die in an accident. So, this is the final reason why I think that capital punishment should be banned.

             For conclusion, I will tell you what I talked about. I talked about why I don’t like capital punishment by giving you three arguments. Those arguments are violence, population decrease and the pain of their families. Before I finish, let me tell you something. Why do we ban capital punishment? This is because it is not useful at all. The criminals might act better but it is not the best way to kill the person who committed crime. Now, what do you think about capital punishment? Do you think that it should go on? I’d like to tell you capital punishment should be banned seriously. Thank you for reading.

the first day of computer lab

I am in the computer room right now. I am very tired and i could not get any info about my debate topic. I am sososososososooooooooo tired

afv

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War

In the 3333, the technology developed so much that people could live until 333 years old. Also, there were a lot of ailiens coming to earth for inavasion. The ailiens were called "creepers, zombies and skeletons." But, the technology developed, they could easily get rid of the ailiens. One day, a mass of ailiens come to invade earth. The number of the ailiens were about 999910184973591 aiiens. Also, they had super good weapons that can make something dissapear. Also, they brought their boss ender man. But, human civilization had better weapons and had better skills of fighting. They killed all the ailiens that invaded earth. After that, they tried to follow them and figure out the landscape of that planet. So they succeed landing at the planet. At that time, all the things turned into a cube even all the people turned into a cube. They had to wear a mask because there were no oxygen there. They caught one of the ailiens and extract their DNA and turned the other people into ailiens. They figured out how the landscape is like and figured out that there are a lot of diamonds inside the land. So they took all the diamonds out somehow and they went at the spaceship. But the ailien called the creeper blew up the spaceship and the whole universe exploded because of this. After 10 years, they survived some how and they come together to make a treaty. After making a treaty, they lived happily ever after.

Response Essay on the movie "Brave"

                  Hello my name is jino. Today, I will talk about the movie “Brave” I will tell you why I hate it. First, I was sleepy. The time was very late. It was 7:00 pm. I just get sleepy when I just watch movie in the early time. Also, the story was very boring so my eyes kept on closing. The second reason why I hate this movie is that it was not interesting. I usually don’t like watching movies. I just don’t like to and sit in a seat for three hours straight. It hurts my eye a lot. And for the movie “Brave” there were no action scenes and I hate movies without action movies. Also, the story was hard to understand. My third reason for hating this movie is that I hate kingdom stories. They are very childish and hard to believe. I was very very sleepy after watching the movie.

           “There was a girl named ‘Merida’ and she didn’t want to marry. So she gave her mom a cake which was bewitched. When her mom ate that cake, she became a bear and Merida tried to get rid of the spell, which she finally does.” I think this is an extremely ridiculous story. It would be better to watch other movies that are available to write a response essay writing about how I liked this movie. For me, the movie was pretty short, too loud, and annoying.

          For conclusion, I will tell you how I liked this movie. If I had to give stars for this movie, I will give three stars for this. I was very happy about watching a movie during the 1^st self study period. It was sad that the movie was childish. I think that this movie was boring because the action scenes did not come out that well. Boys usually enjoy action or super cool movies. For these kinds of reasons, I think the movie Brave was not that interesting. The other movie was better than Brave. I am very sorry for the effort that Ms. Angela put. This is how I thought about the movie. 

dear weather

Hello, weather. You are very cold during time, period. you are often cold as ice, hot as a pot cool as a pool often warm as my mom. I hope that you always warm or cool. but you are getting and getting warmer and warmer and colder and colder.
    you keep making natural disasters and it makes our human world destroyed.please stop that. i'd like to save our human world from becoming extinct from natural disasters.
now, i will tell you about you in KMLA. when i wake up and eat breakfast, then i have to meet you again every single day. when i meet the freezing cold like ice, i think you are very mean.
dear weather would you just be not as cold as before like the past 10 days? then i will be very thankful to you.
sincerly yours,
2013 1/11
jinojung

My goals.

Now I am going to tell you about my goals. First goal is to go to home, healthy to do this, i have to sleep well, eat a lot and wash my hands a lot so that my immune system will prevent me from getting diseases. My second goal is getting a great grade in the speech contest. To do this, I have to get my speech topic and next, I have to pratice  a lot about  my speech. Lastly, I want to learn many things in GLPS. First, I have to concentrate in all things, and do Note taking and have to understand and lasly, I have to memorize those things.

my introduction

hello my name is jino. My birthday is February and I remember spain a lot within the countries that I've traveled, too. I like the letter J because it isw contained in my name. I also like to play sports, I am now 13years old. like to play computer games and like to write a computer blog as well.

The head post of Angela teacher

Welcome to KMLA! The winter camp has commenced and we are going to be busy preparing for the first week and setting up our own personal blogspot.

The first step in our writing adventure is to set up your very own blogspot. I feel your blog is an effective tool to share your writing with your teacher, other students as well as your parents and friends. Anyone can read your blog and also leave comments for you which will, in turn, help improve your writing skills and give you feedback along the way.

 

Here are some tips to help you on your way to becoming a "Blogging Idol":

Your parents are going to see it. Keep this in mind when you are writing and take pride in your work.

Blog anytime, anywhere. You can write anything you want when you have a chance. This is a great opportunity to practice your writing so use your skills to share your experiences at camp, tell people about yourself, share your speeches, keep your parents in the loop about what you are learning or anything else you can think of.

Think about presentation! You want your blog to be interesting for people to see and read. Experiment with fonts, pictures, videos and your layout. Remember to keep your blog neat and clean and try to avoid cluttering it with too many distracting gadgets.

GLPS will award the "Blogging Idol" for the best bloggers at the end of camp. Strive for the best! It is wonderful to get recognition for a job well-done so try to do your best and good luck. I will also be doing "Shoutouts" each week to the best bloggers.
The blog you create here will be a network connecting you to your classmates here at GLPS 18. Through our blogs we can get to know each other and share our thoughts and creativity with each other. And the best thing is that you can continue to blog even after we say goodbye to each other at the end of camp, and I hope you do!

From now on, use this blog as often as you can. Write about your experiences and share ideas and thoughts with myself and your fellow classmates. Read each other's work and give feedback through comments. I look forward to reading all of your work throughout the camp.

After you have setup your blog, please leave a comment under this post. I will add a link to your blog on my page so you will be able to visit other students blogs and make comments.

Your comment should look like this:

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=20853&no=695&weekday=tue

How am i suppose to do this kind of stuffs>?

How am I suppose to do all the things? oh my god I am never going to make this blog fancy but i could not make it fancy otherwise ㅠㅠ I'd like to get advises from other people from comment that how should I own this blog and make it fancy? The person who knows how to do this should! tell me please? we are the last class that made the blog. I think this activity is much interesting because I never had a class of making a blog before in a camp or something else...

The first blog in Gmail

This is my first blog on Gmail. This blog was made in Glps. I hope many of the people will come and visit my blog